專升本英語作文保底10分模板——投訴信

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專升本英語考試的歷年真題一般有以下幾類:書信類、通知、告示、紀要、圖表類、文字類這些。只要把這幾種類型搞定,就能解決作文。為什麼要背模板?大多數同學的英語水平都挺一般,經常會出現邏輯不通,內容淺顯,表達不清楚等問題。

專升本英語考試的歷年真題一般有以下幾類:書信類、通知、告示、紀要、圖表類、文字類這些。只要把這幾種類型搞定,就能解決作文。

為什麼要背模板?

大多數同學的英語水平都挺一般,經常會出現邏輯不通,內容淺顯,表達不清楚等問題。而模板的意義就在於框架+素材,能在給你提供保底分數的情況下給予衝刺高分的可能。靈活使用一份好的模板,是花少量時間得高分快最好的途徑。


作文通用框架

書信類

【第一段】寒暄+寫信目的(兩句話)

【第二段】過渡句+關鍵句(同公務書信)

【第三段】祝福語/重申目的+期待回信


通知類

【第一段】明確目的

【第二段】過渡句+關鍵句

【第三段】重申目的+更多聯繫方式


圖表類(重點)

總體框架:

【第一段】 整體描述+具體數據描述2句 (靜態/動態)

【第二段】 過渡句 +現象原因論證

【第三段】 結論/預測/評價/建議/措施


文字類作文總體框架:

【第一段】總結並改寫題目關鍵句/主題句+說明立場

【第二段】表明態度(完全同意/部分同意/完全不同意)+論證(同圖畫類論證語料庫)

【第三段】總結立場/觀點

投訴信

【文章結構】

第一段:我要投訴這次服務。

第二段:寫明投訴原因

第三段:闡述要求,並表示自己期望回復。


【萬能句式】

一、篇首句

1. I am writing to you about... which I received/bought...

我寫信給你是關於...我收到/買了...

2. Iam going to complain about...

我要投訴......

3. I am writing to inform you that I am dissatisfied with your.

我寫信通知你,我不滿意你的.....

4. I feel sorry to trouble you but I am afraid that I have to make a complaint about.

很抱歉,打擾你了,但我恐怕不得不向你投訴...

5. I wish to draw your attention to the problem that I bought.

我想提醒您注意我購買......的問題

6. I am writing to make a complaint about…

我寫信是要投訴……

7. I feel sorry to trouble you but I am afraid I have to make a serious complaint.

我很抱歉打擾你,但恐怕我必須提出嚴重的投訴。


二、篇中句

1. When I took... out of the bag and examined... closely, I found...

當我拿…從包里出來檢查……仔細地看,我發現……

2. When I unpacked...and tried to use it,it did not work.

當我打開時……我試過了,但沒有用。

3. I will appreciate it very much if you could...

如果你能......的話,我將非常感激

4. I would be grateful if you could...

如果你能......的話,我將感激不盡

5. I trust you will take my complaints seriously and...

我相信你會認真對待我的投訴和......


三、篇尾句

1. I would be grateful if you could...

如果你能……我會很感激。

2. I look forward to your dealing with these problems without delay.

我期待著你毫不拖延地處理這些問題。

3. I hope that my problem will get your consideration.

我希望我的問題能得到您的關注。

4. We do hope that you'll take measures to solve the problem.

我們希望你們能採取措施解決這個問題。

5. I will appreciate it very much if you could…

如果你能……我將非常感激。

6. I must have you fully understand that without a satisfying solution, I will reserve my right to take legal action.

我必須讓你完全明白,如果沒有令人滿意的解決方案,我將保留採取法律行動的權利。


模板與例題

To whom it may concern.

I am________(自我介紹). ②1 feel bad to trouble you but I am afraid that I have to make a complaint about________.

The reason for my dissatisfaction is________(總體介紹). In the first place,________(抱怨的第一個方面).In addition,________(抱怨的第二個方面).Under these circumstances, I find it________(感覺)to________(抱怨的方面給你帶來的後果).

I appreciate it very much if you could________(提出建議和請求),preferably________(進一步的要求),and I would like to have this matter settled by________(設定解決事情最後期限)Thank you for your consideration and I will be looking forward to your reply.


Yours sincerely,

Li Hua



【真題演練】

假如你是李華,周末在書店購買了一本英文小說。回家後你發現書本有質量問題,與店員理論,其服務態度不好,因此你決定給書店經理寫一封投訴信。內容包括:

1. 反映存在問題;2. 提出解決方案。

注意:

1. 寫作詞數應為80左右;

2. 請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。

Dear Manager,

____________________________________________________________________________________

【優秀範文】

I am writing this letter to complain about some problems I have come across recently in your bookstore. Yesterday I bought an English novel with an elaborately designed cover. But later I found that several pages of the book were cracked and befouled. What is worse, the misprints spread everywhere in the book and seriously affected my comprehension. I went to your bookstore to require a replacement. Surprisingly, your staff turned down my request rudely and even denied the poor quality of the book.

Now, I'm wondering whether you can refund or exchange a new one for me. In the meantime, I'd like to appeal to better service of your staff. An early response will be appreciated.

Yours,

Li Hua


【導語】本篇書面表達屬於應用文。假如你是李華,周末在書店購買了一本英文小說。回家後你發現書本有質量問題,與店員理論,其服務態度不好,因此你決定給書店經理寫一封投訴信。

【詳解】1.詞彙積累

遇到:come across→run into

購買:buy→purchase

嚴重地:seriously→severely

拒絕:turn down→refuse

2.句式拓展

合併簡單句

原句:Yesterday I bought an English novel with an elaborately designed cover. But later I found that several pages of the book were cracked and befouled.

拓展句:Yesterday I bought an English novel with an elaborately designed cover, of which later I found that several pages were cracked and befouled.

【點睛】[高分句型1] I am writing this letter to complain about some problems I have come across recently in your bookstore. (運用了省略關係詞的定語從句)

[高分句型2] Now, I'm wondering whether you can refund or exchange a new one for me. (運用了whether引導賓語從句)

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